post: keep the body in first person; second person only in the closing CTA

src/content/posts/running-ai-video-locally-on-a-12gb-gpu.md

@@ -28,9 +28,9 @@ second for reference-to-video, so a 5-second shot is roughly \$0.56. That is
 cheap if a shot lands first try.
 
 The problem is that shots do not land first try. Generating video is an
-iterative act: you change the prompt, change the start frame, drop a seed, run
-it again. The cost that hurts is not the final render, it is the thirty renders
-that taught you what the final one should be. That is the work a local GPU is
+iterative act: I change the prompt, change the start frame, drop a seed, run it
+again. The cost that hurts is not the final render, it is the thirty renders
+that taught me what the final one should be. That is the work a local GPU is
 actually good at.
 
 ## The models that fit in 12 GB
@@ -161,8 +161,8 @@ instantly.
 
 ## The pipeline, end to end
 
-Draft at 480p to judge motion and composition — sharpness at 480p tells you
-nothing, so do not evaluate it there. Then the accepted shots go through:
+Draft at 480p to judge motion and composition — sharpness at 480p says nothing
+about the delivered shot, so it is the wrong place to judge it. Then the accepted shots go through:
 
 ```bash
 # clear VRAM first, every time